Madia, I've checked quite a few PS2 flying tutorial videos since I started playing this game and this one has the potential to become one of the most popular. It's that good: Simple, compact, extensive and high skill level. If people practice this step by step they will actually become very skilled pilots B)
This is what I suggest you to do to make that happen:
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[li]Cut the video in half by making a seperate tutorial for the Liberator[/li]
[li]Correct a few spelling errors (like "sekondary")[/li]
[li]Have some overlay text appear longer on screen so people don't need to pause/rewind to read it[/li]
[li]Make some text a bit more explanatory (example lesson 19, newbie test is kinda cryptic)[/li]
[li]Attach some non-annoying
royalty free music to it[/li]
[li]Attach a BRTD logo[/li]
[li]Post it on reddit/psu/official forums[/li]
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If you do this I guarantee you it will become
Command Center material